This
morning I had to make an early run to Kroger to pick up some onions. As I drove
down the road, I noticed there were absolutely no other cars to be seen. Although
this place is nick-named “Quiet Mountain” because it is usually quiet, this was
unusual.
Ahead
of me was a rather creepy wall of fog. Since Kroger was only a mile up the
road, I decided to just drive through the fog. I slowed down as I entered the
fog because I could barely see ten feet in front of me. I was nervously looking
around for anyone or anything. I felt like I was in some kind of scary movie where
some large monster would jump out on my windshield. My driving had slowed to a crawl, so it
seemed to take forever just to drive one mile to Kroger.
The
silence was deafening, so I turned on the radio, hoping for some soft-and-easy
listening music. Instead, I heard a loud ear-piercing, screeching static. I
tried to change the radio station, but the ear-piercing sound would not go
away.
As
I tried to turn off the radio, I barely noticed a figure standing in front of
the car. I hit the brakes, but it was too late. I hit the person and he
disappeared from view. I put the car in park and immediately got out of the car
to check on the person, hoping that he/she was okay. But when I got around to
the front of the car, there wasn’t a person in front of the car. Instead, there
was some slimy, faceless figure without eyes or a mouth crawling toward me. It
reached out with its front claws, trying to grab at my feet. I screamed and quickly
ran back into my car. The radio was still playing a loud, ear-piercing static,
but I didn’t care. The only thing I cared about was getting away from here. I immediately
drove in reverse and kept driving.
I
barely went ten feet before I immediately braked. I got out of the car to make
sure what I was seeing was true. There was a gigantic crevice separating the road.
I peered down the crevice; it looked bottomless. I turned around and saw not
one, but about fifteen of those slimy, faceless figures all coming toward me. Except
this time, not only were there more of them, they were all walking with outstretched
claws and they were all laughing. I thought about getting into the car, but
they were already blocking my way to the car door.
There
was nothing around me, no buildings, no trees, no sidewalks. Just a bottomless
crevice in front of my car and slimy, faceless, laughing people all around me. My
heart was racing and fear was overtaking me. I needed to run but there was
nowhere to run.
I
needed a weapon. I looked at the back end of my car and thought maybe I could
get something from the trunk. I remembered that I had a crowbar in the trunk, so
I quickly ran to the trunk. I fumbled around my pocket for the keys and managed
to get the right key for the trunk on my first try. My fears were quickly fading
as I thought, now I can fight back. But when I opened the trunk, my hopes were
dashed as I saw that nothing but worms and giant spiders filling my trunk. I turned away, ready to throw up, only to
turn into the claws of a slimy, faceless, laughing monster.
I
fell to the ground and tried to scream, but my screams could not be heard over
the sounds of the ear-piercing static coming from the car. I was soon blanketed
by a mountain of slimy, faceless, laughing creatures. I tried to think. Was
there anything I could do to escape this? I couldn’t do anything. My situation
was hopeless. But then I realized that there was something I could do to escape! I got up and turned
the game off.
Strong, suspenseful buildup, Josh, and I enjoyed your witty ending. We can always count on your for imaginative and well-written fiction.
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