This
morning I had to make an early run to Kroger to pick up some onions. As I drove
down the road, I noticed there were absolutely no other cars to be seen. Although
this place is nick-named “Quiet Mountain” because it is usually quiet, this was
unusual.
Ahead
of me was a rather creepy wall of fog. Since Kroger was only a mile up the
road, I decided to just drive through the fog. I slowed down as I entered the
fog because I could barely see ten feet in front of me. I was nervously looking
around for anyone or anything. I felt like I was in some kind of scary movie where
some large monster would jump out on my windshield. My driving had slowed to a crawl, so it
seemed to take forever just to drive one mile to Kroger.
The
silence was deafening, so I turned on the radio, hoping for some soft-and-easy
listening music. Instead, I heard a loud ear-piercing, screeching static. I
tried to change the radio station, but the ear-piercing sound would not go
away.
As
I tried to turn off the radio, I barely noticed a figure standing in front of
the car. I hit the brakes, but it was too late. I hit the person and he
disappeared from view. I put the car in park and immediately got out of the car
to check on the person, hoping that he/she was okay. But when I got around to
the front of the car, there wasn’t a person in front of the car. Instead, there
was some slimy, faceless figure without eyes or a mouth crawling toward me. It
reached out with its front claws, trying to grab at my feet. I screamed and quickly
ran back into my car. The radio was still playing a loud, ear-piercing static,
but I didn’t care. The only thing I cared about was getting away from here. I immediately
drove in reverse and kept driving.

There
was nothing around me, no buildings, no trees, no sidewalks. Just a bottomless
crevice in front of my car and slimy, faceless, laughing people all around me. My
heart was racing and fear was overtaking me. I needed to run but there was
nowhere to run.
I
needed a weapon. I looked at the back end of my car and thought maybe I could
get something from the trunk. I remembered that I had a crowbar in the trunk, so
I quickly ran to the trunk. I fumbled around my pocket for the keys and managed
to get the right key for the trunk on my first try. My fears were quickly fading
as I thought, now I can fight back. But when I opened the trunk, my hopes were
dashed as I saw that nothing but worms and giant spiders filling my trunk. I turned away, ready to throw up, only to
turn into the claws of a slimy, faceless, laughing monster.
I
fell to the ground and tried to scream, but my screams could not be heard over
the sounds of the ear-piercing static coming from the car. I was soon blanketed
by a mountain of slimy, faceless, laughing creatures. I tried to think. Was
there anything I could do to escape this? I couldn’t do anything. My situation
was hopeless. But then I realized that there was something I could do to escape! I got up and turned
the game off.
Strong, suspenseful buildup, Josh, and I enjoyed your witty ending. We can always count on your for imaginative and well-written fiction.
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